<p>Could someone please read my college essay and provide me with some feedback?</p>
<p>I'd really appreciate constructive criticism which would help me work on it.</p>
<p>Thank youu!</p>
<p>pm it. after this or tne next essay i’m closing shop for a while.</p>
<p>Send it over.
It’d be nice if you could read mine also.</p>
<p>Did you get my comments?</p>
<p>Limabeans, yes i have! =D</p>
<p>Thank you loads and LOADS, i will PM you shortly! =)</p>
<p>metalmethod741, thank you for your feedback as well, really appreciate it =)</p>
<p>We can swap if you’re willing to give me harsh feedback as well.</p>