Feedback on Common app Essay Please!

College Essays
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<p>I am interested in attending top-tier schools, including Brown, Notre Dame, and U Penn. </p>

<p>However, I am really not a strong writer at all! </p>

<p>Would anyone (adults, college students, parents?) like to look over my essay and give me some constructive criticism? Thank you so much for your time! :) </p>

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<p>okay.</p>

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<p>I’d love to. Please send it over via PM.</p>

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<p>anyone else?? :)</p>

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<p>send it along
must warn u though not the best college essayist</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look. I’m a college freshman.</p>