Feedback on common application short answer

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>Hello,
I wrote my short answer for the common application. The questions asks to Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below (1000 character maximum). If anyone would like to read my answer and give me feedback I would really appreciate it. Answer the thread and I will pm you my answer.
Thanks.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you’d like.</p>

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<p>I can give comments!</p>

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<p>i would love to read it. could you read mine in return?</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>I can surely help. PM it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read if you need someone else!</p>