Feedback on Essay?

Hi there. I just finished an essay today, and would greatly appreciate it if I could get some feedback. Any responses are greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance.

I will read it

Thank you!

If you’d like another reader I’m happy to look at it as well.

Sure :slight_smile:

I can read it.

Please PM it to me.

I can read it too if you still want help

Little late but I’d love to review and give my opinions.