<p>Hi! I have rewritten this essay many times and am DONE, but I need people to look over it before I officially submit it! I am not a good essay writer.. (applying to engineering, haha), so please help!</p>
<p>PM me I’ll look it over for you.</p>
<p>finally a “finished” piece.</p>
<p>Sure thing ill help</p>
<p>I’ll look it over and give you an overall impression. PM me :)</p>
<p>sure, i’ll check it</p>
<p>I’ll look it over, PM me</p>