Feedback on Influential Person Essay

<p>So I've got an alright rough draft right now, looking for someone to give me some feedback. High post count preferred even though it's kinda hypocritical of me lol.</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

<p>patsfan</p>

<p>I’ve read around 10+ essays on CC and have given my opinion. So PM me :D</p>

<p>I think I am a pretty rational critic; interested to read it</p>