Feedback on my Common App Essay Please?

<p>Hi, I would like some feedback on which topic seems are unique for the second common app essay option.
This is the second prompt: "Recount an incident or time when you experienced failure. How did it affect you, and what lessons did you learn?"</p>

<p>Please post below if you would be willing to review my essay. Thank you! </p>

<p>Edit: Not which topic seems unique, but how the essay sounds to you. </p>

<p>Happy to help. Just PM me.</p>