Feedback on my Common App Essay

<p>Hello everyone,</p>

<p>I've just written a very rough draft of my Common App essay, and would like some feedback on it. Please let me know if you are willing to read it for me! Thanks in advance.</p>

<p>Ya sure no problem</p>

<p>I’ll help out and give the best constructive criticism or praise that I can. PM me.</p>

<p>Thanks to both of the posters above!
Is anyone else willing to give my essay a read? School literally just ended today for me, and I’m super hyped to be writing, haha.</p>

<p>Sure I’d love to help!</p>

<p>I’ll take a look</p>

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>

<p>PM me if you want brutally honest (yet constructive) advice. :)</p>

<p>Sorry for the late response; I’ve been away. I’ll PM all of you tomorrow. Thanks in advance!</p>

<p>I’ll read it if you still want feedback!</p>

<p>I’m available. </p>

<p>Sure, feel free to PM me, i’d be happy to help out :slight_smile: @clarinetkid</p>

<p>sure, pm me :slight_smile: </p>