Feedback on my Cornell Essay please?

Hi everyone,

Could someone please read my Cornell Essay and give me some feedback on it?

I couldn’t find anyone to critique it and the deadline is tomorrow :frowning: :frowning:

Any sort of help is appreciated! xx

I’m willing to read it

I’m willing to read, pm me.

For future reference, based on the tips about essay posting, you probably shouldn’t name the school.

I’m applied for Cornell as well! I’d be glad to give it a read.

@eidetic1pro Oops yea I just noticed that. Thanks for the advice!

@Amyleeal I just sent off my app. Thanks for the offer though :slight_smile:

Hope it turned out alright!

@Amyleeal I hope so too! Good luck in your applications!

Sure, im currently a college freshmen. I will read it for you