Feedback on my essay

<p>Hey,</p>

<p>Since all you SCEAers are getting a little anxious waiting for decisions, I was hoping that you, as well as some current students at Stanford, could critique my essay.</p>

<p>I've got two essays but am not sure which one to use for the common app, if any.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>I did SCEA this year, if you PM it to me ill take a look. Good Luck with admissions man, almost 5 days and we SCEA’s will finally know</p>

<p>I’ll read them (: Just send them over
This has been the most agonizing wait for anything.</p>

<p>PM me and I will ravish them with my editing keyboard of passion.</p>