Feedback on my first draft?

College Essays
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<p>I've completed a first draft of my common app essay but I'm not sure if it's any good. Post here if you're willing to read my essay and I shall PM it to you. Thanks in advance.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>Same here!</p>

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<p>PMed! I really appreciate all feedback. Thanks!</p>

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<p>Sure! Wouldn’t mind helping out.</p>

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<p>Sure! PM me</p>

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<p>I’m willing to read it :)</p>

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<p>PMed y’all! Thanks again for reading my essay.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it as well</p>