<p>Would someone be willing to take a look at my SOP and provide feedback? I'm happy to pm it and will review yours too. My advisor tends to say "it's great!" to everything and I'm worried she isn't able to give me constructive criticism because she's so supportive of what I want to do. I'm a nontraditional student applying to an Interdisciplinary Social Science Master of Science program.</p>
<p>Thanks for your input. I haven’t heard the suggestion of changing the font and reading it aloud, so I will have to try that. I agree that my essay is at least decent, but I have a few weeks before the deadline so I’d like to get as close to amazing as possible. I have to write a personal/diversity statement as well so I figure while I focus more on that I could get some fresh eyes on my sop. And yes I can only imagine the horrors that adcoms see. I don’t envy them one bit lol.</p>