<p>If you can offer feedback and revisions to my personal statement, I will greatly appreciate it. I will pm you it, if you are able to do so...I will revise yours if you revise mine. Thanks!</p>
<p>If you can offer feedback and revisions to my personal statement, I will greatly appreciate it. I will pm you it, if you are able to do so...I will revise yours if you revise mine. Thanks!</p>