Feedback on Stanford supplement essay

College Essays
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<p>I’m working on my Stanford supplemental essays and feel like I’m really struggling to stay within the word/character limit and maintain personality and authenticity in my essays. I was hoping some people wouldn’t mind reading them and giving me some feedback. I don’t consider myself a good writer (I’m more of a math and science kind of girl) so I could really use the help! THANK YOU!!</p>

<li><p>why stanford </p></li>
<li><p>what my roommate may like to know about me (and the admissions office).</p></li>
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<p>i might be able to help you
PM and i'll tell you what to improve upon</p>

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<p>I think I can help you out...</p>

<p>Just PM me!</p>

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<p>sure thing i can check it.</p>

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<p>I wanna read
pm or <a href="mailto:jyang1211@gmail.com">jyang1211@gmail.com</a>
:D</p>

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<p>sure pm me</p>

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<p>i'll take a look!</p>