<p>hey guys and gals!
wanna give me feedback on one of my Stanford short essays?
it's for the question:
"Virtually all of Stanford's undergraduates live on campus. What would you want your freshman roommate to know about you? Tell us something about you that will help your roommate -- and us -- know you better."
respond and ill message it to ya!!!</p>
<p>I've already written the Intellectual and Roomate essay and have an outline for the why essay; if you are comfortable, I'd be glad to give you some feedback.</p>
<p>Consider asking a close friend/relative to look it over. This essay provides an excellent opportunity to highlight your uniqueness, and a close friend/relative will be able to tell if you've accomplished this or not.</p>