Feedback on the "roomate" essay!

<p>hey guys and gals!
wanna give me feedback on one of my Stanford short essays?
it's for the question:
"Virtually all of Stanford's undergraduates live on campus. What would you want your freshman roommate to know about you? Tell us something about you that will help your roommate -- and us -- know you better."
respond and ill message it to ya!!!</p>

<p>thanks!</p>

<p>I'll look at it if you want. '13 here though so if you don't want the competition peeking, don't send it.</p>

<p>I'll take a look at it for you if you want.</p>

<p>I'm also a stanford hopeful, I'll look at it</p>

<p>I've already written the Intellectual and Roomate essay and have an outline for the why essay; if you are comfortable, I'd be glad to give you some feedback.</p>

<p>u can send it to me</p>

<p>i'll take a look</p>

<p>Sure! I'd love to read it!</p>

<p>i'd take a look</p>

<p>Send it to me if you want feedback, but fyi I'm applying EA this year :) I've already written my essays though</p>

<p>I'm applying SCEA this year too, but I've already submitted. So if you want an extra opinion, pm it over :)</p>

<p>I'll read it. Just PM it over!</p>

<p>Consider asking a close friend/relative to look it over. This essay provides an excellent opportunity to highlight your uniqueness, and a close friend/relative will be able to tell if you've accomplished this or not.</p>

<p>Good luck!</p>

<p>I will read it :D</p>

<p>i'd love to give some feedback
pm me it</p>

<p>i'll take a look at it for you if you want.</p>

<p>PM me !</p>

<p>I'll take a look.</p>

<p>I'm a current Stanford student. I wouldn't angst over this question too much. I had fun with mine and it obviously worked out fine.</p>

<p>thanks everyone!!!!!!!!!</p>