Feedback on the "roomate" essay!

<p>I have sent in my application, too. Email me if you don't mind another '13 reading it. :D</p>

<p>I just like reading and editing interesting essays :) PM me</p>

<p>i just finished this, id like to see yours for comparison. ill give feedback</p>

<p>I would love to help. :)</p>

<p>I'll take a look.</p>

<p>i submitted it on sunday ='(
thanks though!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?</p>