Feedbacking each others Personal Statements

Transfer Students UC Transfers
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<p>Hey all, its almost the 30th so I would like some feedback/comments on my personal statement! In return, I will also read yours =)
I will try to provide grammar corrections and feedback on the concept of your essay and it would be nice if you did too.</p>

<p>just post, and PM me your essays and ill pm you mine.</p>

<p>and ill be checking this post often today so you can expect a response.</p>

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<p>bump…
really need some outside opinions.</p>

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<p>bump again… going to costco ill brb</p>

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<p>Hey all last bump forever… i had one guy read mine but i had to go to his thread.
would really like some feedback -</p>