Feedbacks on my Personal Statement?

Transfer Students
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<p>Just finished an essay for Washington U in St. Louis.... Those who are aiming at TOP20 schools want to take a look and offer me some suggestions? Thanks so much!!!</p>

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<p>sure, pm is to me and I'll take a look. im applying to cornell btw</p>

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<p>ill take a look if you send it to me</p>

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<p>I'd be willing to take a look and offer suggestions.</p>

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<p>i will read it. pm me. :)</p>

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<p>sure, PM me and i will give u feedback</p>

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<p>pm me and ill pm you</p>

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<p>PM me and I'll give you my humble opinion</p>

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<p>I'd love to read it and give you my opinion. I too will be starting my transfer essays soon!</p>

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<p>sure PM me; im starting mine soon and hopefully you will be open to check mine later.</p>

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<p>I'll take a look, I already applied for spring 09 transfer to washU.</p>

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<p>sure if u still need help, send me and ill give ya some insight</p>

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<p>PM and I can give you some feedback.</p>

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<p>Hey if you are still interested in getting feedback, I would be willing to look i over. PM me if you would like.</p>

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<p>Fire away.</p>

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<p>hey id like to see yourss, btw i have a personal statement if anyone is willing to review</p>

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<p>i can take a look at it if you like. pm me.</p>

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<p>PM me my man
<a href="mailto:mfd3q@virginia.edu">mfd3q@virginia.edu</a></p>

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<p>Oh...thanks for all your opinions! I actually tossed my old version essay into the dustbin, since I thought it did not work. I have re-written one, and would like to hear your suggestions! Thank you very much!</p>

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<p>anybody? thanks very much!</p>