Feedbacks on my Personal Statement?

[2e4L]

<p>Sure hit me up, although no one has ever pm'd their essay before ):
Make my day!</p>

[shwayzeee]

<p>I'd be willing to help...</p>

[sophtransfer]

<p>i'd love to look if you don't mind</p>

[Ophelia1]

<p>I'll take a look too. PM me.</p>

[dw_wd]

<p>pm me if you like me to look at it</p>