<p>So...here's the story. I don't consider myself a terrible writer, but within the last few weeks I have come up with some truly bad essays. This essay is for the Common App and is the best of the bunch, but I'm still aware that it is AWFUL.
It has several problems, including length (737), grammar mistakes, lack of transitioning. I've tried and tried to rewrite it but I feel like I'm making it increasingly worse. So I've come to beg all of you for your harshest critisms- please help me turn my essay into something that won't cause an admission officer's brain to leak out of his ears.
Thank you & remember, this is a fantastic opportunity to take all of that college anger and stress out! God knows we all need it :)</p>
<p>pm me :)</p>
<p>I’ll read it.</p>