FEEL LIKE EDITING?????? 1st draft

College Essays
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<p>hey guyss! ya'll know the drill (i'll check your history, pm you, you make my essay better, make me happpy, i send you a huge virtual kiss, etc etc)</p>

<p>some specifics</p>

<p>-its long. too long. any reduncies and using 10 words for 2 kinda thing would be great if u can fix</p>

<p>-its sort of a sob story. i've gotten to the point where i'm above this issue, and i really really dont want it to sound like it, so it does let me kno</p>

<p>-first draft, just whipped it up, half the time i'm talking with the sophistication of a 12 year old, so beware, any suggestions would be nice</p>

<p>have fuunnn!!! and THANKS in advance!</p>

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<p>Sure, i’ll read it, if you don’t mind having another 2014’er read it…</p>

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<p>anyone else? this is for common app btw</p>

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<p>buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuump</p>

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<p>hey ill read it if you want</p>

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<p>thnx!</p>

<p>bump?</p>

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<p>I’ll gladly edit it. :)</p>

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<p>if you still need people to take a look, i’ll read it! send it to me as an attachment- <a href="mailto:missmibster@yahoo.com">missmibster@yahoo.com</a></p>

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<p>sweet! i`ll send it now!</p>

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<p>anybody else??</p>

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<p>i’ll read it. pm it over.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it…PM me!</p>

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<p>ill read it pm me</p>

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<p>thanks!, sent!</p>

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<p>bumpbump!!</p>

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<p>buuuuuuuuuump</p>