<p>I had done an essay back in August for commonapp and USC, but going back to it now it seems awful. If anyone wants to read it and let me know what I may have done right, please let me know.</p>
<p>I'm brainstorming new ideas right now, but everything seems so shallow - stuff like achievements in clubs, working towards success, etc.</p>
<p>How should I try to avoid such topics? Any ideas of what types of experiences I should look for instead?</p>
<p>UPDATE: Thought about it, and I'm doing an essay based on a club, but not about any specific accolade, but the journey itself and it's impact.</p>