Final copy of essay

Colleges and Universities A-Z University of Michigan
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<p>Would anyone be kind enough to take a look at my Short Answer Essay for the University of Michigan?</p>

<p>I have asked this before but only a few replied and I have changed my essay quite a bit.</p>

<p>Any constructive criticism is appreciated and if you check for any grammatical errors as well and I'll be indebted to you forever. Thanks in advance!</p>

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<p>Sure, Ill take a look</p>

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<p>sure, pm it to me</p>

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<p>I'll look at it.</p>

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<p>I'll look at it too</p>

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<p>Thanks for offerrrrrrring but I already applied! =)</p>