final draft, is this confusing?

College Essays
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<p>Yeah this is my final draft fooor sure, and I just need someone to tell me if it sounds confusing or not. It's the last time I need anything proof read..ahhh!</p>

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<p>i’m an 08er, i’ll be willing to offer critique if you want me to, pm it to me</p>

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<p>some more feedback please?</p>

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<p>send it to me via pm.</p>

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<p>pm me </p>

<p>who is this one for?</p>