<p>would anyone care to read/give feedback? already had some great help on my rough draft... also looking for particular criticism/feedback on my conclusion</p>
<p>thanks so much!</p>
<p>I wrote one like this for UNC. I will be glad to read and give an opinion. feel free to PM me</p>
<p>I wrote one of those for Chicago, so I could probably help out a bit. PM me.</p>