Final draft !!

<p>Anybody care to read and give an opinion on my essay?? </p>

<p>I'd love to critique you're essay if you critique mine. </p>

<p>Thanks
Azhir</p>

<p>I'll read & critique your essay if you PM it to me.</p>

<p>sure, why not</p>

<p>sure, pm me</p>

<p>Sure, I'd love to read it... and if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account... but I'd prefer a pm</p>

<p><a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>