FINALLY finished my essay...any reads?

College Essays
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<p>Anyone care to critique my essay? I can use all the help I can get! thanks!</p>

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<p>I'll read it</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>PM me</p>

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<p>I'll read it.</p>

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<p>ill read it!</p>

<p>yah PM me</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>i'll read it. which uni is this for?</p>

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<p>sure np, pm me</p>

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<p>I'll take a look at it.</p>

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<p>ill read. PM me</p>

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<p>i'll help... pm =]</p>

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<p>I'll read too! : )</p>