Financial Aid Appeal Letter ( I need help from the community i want to improve this)

Paying for College
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<p>To Financial Aid Committee:</p>

<p>My name is . My school id# is. My email is .</p>

<p>I’m writing this because I got disqualified from receiving financial aid. This is my first year in college I knew it would be a challenge. I wanted to go to college and have a educational and that would be transferring to a 4year institute. My goal is to be a engineer major. I knew it would be tough from the beginning.</p>

<p>In fall 2009 I chose classes that were too difficult, it wasn’t interesting to me. From the start I did okay but things started to be complicated to me but I just keep sustaining what I do so I can pass that class. But when midterm was around I tried to do well on midterms but I didn’t do so well and I thought withdrawing it would be the best solution. After getting below 2.0 gpa I started to think what is going on with me with academics. My parents always expect me to do well in school and that motivates me to do well in school. I just don’t try hard and put enough time on school work enough to reach that goal. My parents don’t really support me so I rely on my financial aid and I knew I had to make a change to regain it back.</p>

<p>I started to make plans for next semester so I can get back on track to be a successful student and to regain my financial aid eligibility back.
1. I will choose classes that I know I can complete.
2. I will manage my time wisely and put more time on school work.
3. I will get help when I don’t understand the materials in class.
4. Complete classes C or better.</p>

<p>I understand the expectation better now and I am looking forward to pass all my classes this spring. I been doing well lately in my spring classes, with all passing grades and I think I made a huge improvement and my mindset is to pass the classes at the end of the semester. I am satisfied with what I done so far but to fulfill my education plan I request this committee to give me another chance to prove that I can still accomplish my goals and be successful on upcoming semesters.</p>

<p>Thank you for allowing me the opportunity to explain my financial circumstances. I look forward to hearing about your decision.</p>

<p>Sincerely,</p>

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<p>rewrite it so that it is grammatically correct and so you use words that exist.</p>

<p>“i wanted to go to college and have a educational”</p>

<p>“i wanted to go to college to get an education”</p>

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<p>I’m not clear. You had financial aid of some kind and you lost it due to not keeping your GPA up? Is that correct?</p>

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<p>Is there a writing lab at your school? If so, you might sit down with one of the tutors and have them explain some basic grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure to you. I don’t mean to offend, but you’ll benefit more from the experience than from having us rewrite it for you!</p>