Hello! So I am currently trying to find schools to apply to. First, some info about me though: so I graduated high school in June and am currently taking a gap year. I went through the application process last year and got into some pretty good schools (more on that in a second), and after deciding I would attend USC, my dad told me he was no longer willing to pay for college, and since I didn’t really want to graduate with $200k, I withdrew from USC and decided to take a gap year. Thus, this time around, while I would still like to go to a very reputable school, I would also like to be able to afford college - whether that is through merit scholarship, exceptional fin aid, or a great work-study program.
So last year the schools I was admitted to: USC, Univ. of Toronto, Univ. of Michigan, Tulane, NYU, Carnegie Mellon, Cornell, and McGill.
I was rejected from: Yale, Princeton, Georgetown, and Univ. of Virginia.
So my stats:
Objective:
• SAT I (breakdown): I don’t plan on sending, but it’s a 1300
• ACT (breakdown): 31, 32 (superscored)
◦ English 32
◦ Math 32
◦ Reading 34
◦ Science 28
• SAT II (place score in parentheses): M2: 700, Bio: 670, Lit: 650 (I know not great, but I didn’t study for any of them!)
• Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.53
◦ Weighted (out of 5.0): 3.93 - it’s probably important to note that I had a VERY strong upward trend. My senior year grades were straight As and I got a 4.63 senior year.
• Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): n/a
• AP (place score in parentheses): I don’t plan on submitting, but her are the APs I’ve taken: US History, Euro History, Lit, Lang, Bio, Comp Sci Principles, Stats, Calc AB, Psych
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parentheses):
Former top swimmer (I fell off the radar a little bit)-as a freshman in high school I was #1 in the country in a couple events, so with this I’ve been Utah High School Athlete of the Year twice, I hold multiple state records in my high school division, and some other stuff I guess.
I also do science olympiad: I got 6th at state in cell biology, and 12th at state in disease analysis (last year).
I am working with some peers to create our own cafe (through an organization). I mostly help with creating the website and some of the manual labor, but we also have to design the space, interview people for jobs, and create a financial plan.
This year I am a co-head editor for my schools Literary Magazine. Our lit mag is highly regarded and has one dozens of awards, often being called one of the top 10 high school literary magazines in the country.
I am president of our schools LGBTQ club. Most notably, last year we petitioned to get a gender neutral bathroom in our school and change graduation robes all to one color (rather than segregating by gender) to help make transgender students feel more welcome.
I played piano for 10years (stopping when I was 15) and went to competitions state-wide
I’m planning on doing an immersion program in Madrid come January. I will be there for 6months.
Job/Work Experience: n/a
Volunteer/Community Service:
This past summer I’ve been interning at an architecture firm for about 36hrs/week. I am now working at Starbucks part time for about 20hrs/week.
For the last two summers Ive been a 1st grade teachers assistant. I worked about 20hrs a week in the summers?
I used to work at the rape recovery center, volunteering about 12hrs a week, only for a year though.
Over summers I taught swim lessons to disadvantaged children.
Summer Activities: swimming, volunteering, eating
Essays: My Common App essay was about not feeling I fit in anywhere (being gay, mixed race, Buddhist, and in a divorced family) and how after my sister dropped out of high school I felt the need to be perfect. It was very well written and many people loved it.
Other:
• State (if domestic applicant): Utah (becoming a CA resident at the moment)
• Country (if international applicant):
• School Type: Private School - very well known. We are consistently a top10 debate program in the country, ski program in the world, and lit mag is well renouned. Additionally, my school is often known for deflating grades. I have had teachers in the past who will curve a test down.
• Ethnicity: white/asian (japanese)/pacific islander (malaysian, singaporean)
• Gender: male.
• Income Bracket: my parents are divorced. Mom is ~60k, dad is wealthy, 250k+
So far, the schools I’m planning on applying to are:
University of Utah (safety)
UCLA (I have no idea whether I’m considered in-state or OOS at the moment, so I have no idea)
UC Berkeley (again, the same thing)
Brown (reach)
Columbia (reach)
I’m hoping to get suggestions on where to apply? I’m hoping to get into a school with very good fin aid (I still qualify because of my mom), or where I can get a merit scholarship.
Please give suggestions!