Finding A Passion: for Dartmouth applicants

<p>One thing that not many people recognize is that a lot of it has to do with how you fill out your application. Obviously, things like "SAT: 1460" is going to look the same everywhere. For objective data, there are a ton of mean, median, and mode statistics out there. You don't need us for that.</p>

<p>But then there are things like extra-curriculars, awards, recommendations, and essays. Those are very much in your control and here's how you can present yourself in a positive light for those. It's now generally acknowledged that elite colleges want students with "passions." You have to be dedicated to one area, not all over the place, scattered and unfocused. How do you make your application consistent with your passion? Simple: the above four categories (possibly which SAT II's you took, also).</p>

<p>List the EC's and awards that line up with your passion (or passions) FIRST. Art extraordinare? Easy. List Art Club, art competitions, shows, camps, first, even if you're not the president of those. Just as long as you've shown significant commitment to say, three art-related activities, that will demonstrate your interest in that.</p>

<p>Write a line of description next to each award. Dartmouth doesn't know about your school "Shakespeare Award." They don't care about the Shakespeare Award UNTIL you emphasize how only one person in the 11th grade is given this award for best work in Shakespeare research AND it correlates to your passion with Shakespeare's work.</p>

<p>Say your passion is math, but you got an A+ in history and an A- in math. If you are truly enthusiastic about math, you should ask your math teacher for the recommendation first. It lines up with the rest of your application better. Also, remember to include a mini-resume when you're giving your teacher your rec. so that they can include other math-related activities when talking about your commitment (ex. "I know that John is enthusiastic about math outside of class as well. He is one of the most prominent members of the math olympiads...") Bottom line:ask teachers for recommendations in your passion subject area first. </p>

<p>Write a Common App. essay for every college. Then change the name to "Dartmouth" and DON'T STOP THERE. Take twenty minutes out of your life. Browse online on the Dartmouth website. Find something on there that correlates to your passion. Fascinated with Classics and find out that Dartmouth has an award-winning Classics department? List specifics. Talk about professors you would love to work with, papers you've followed, programs exclusive to the college (like Dartmouth's Women in Science Program or Norman Rockefeller Public Policy Internship Grants). Show them you've done your homework, and that you aren't just applying BECAUSE DARTMOUTH'S IVY LEAGUE.</p>

<p>Good essays have two goals: to demonstrate the author's human side, and to correlate to their passions. Been raving about medieval history in your application and suddenly switch to skate-boarding in your essay? That's random. It could work if you are very, very accomplished in medieval history and have won a number of awards and to write about it would be just overkill. But if it's something you just picked up, I would stick with medieval history. Write about how you became interested in it. Don't talk facts... that's boring.Talk about feelings. Better yet: show feelings. Show examples. If Dartmouth wanted an extended resume, they would ask for one.</p>

<p>Good luck.</p>

<p>"Fascinated with Classics and find out that Dartmouth has an award-winning Classics department? List specifics. Talk about professors you would love to work with, papers you've followed, programs exclusive to the college (like Dartmouth's Women in Science Program or Norman Rockefeller Public Policy Internship Grants)." </p>

<p>To piggy back on what Raspberry Smothie said, look at the study abroad program (classic's has a study abroad to Rome and Greece on alternate years, look into the various study aboards see if they tie in to your passions, look into the student employment for the different types of jobs and internships that you may be interested in).</p>

<p>If you are banking on your community service check out the Tucker Foundation to see what type of work and projects they are doing. As Raspberry said , Know something (a lot) about the school which you are applying to).</p>

<p>All the abest as you finish up these essays and make the December 31 deadline.</p>

<p>Rasbery, I was wondering if you could perhaps review my CA essay?</p>

<p>I think it sums up what you're talking about :)</p>

<p>I'd love to. Send me a PM and I'll get back to you as soon as I can.</p>

<p>It's a shame I sent mine off before reading this. I don't think that I did anything contrary to this philosophy, but I didn't personalize my essay. I'm not worried about it but I would have liked to.</p>

<p>What has passed has passed, though.</p>

<p>will a passion supplemented with amazing ECs and recommendations offset a 1400< sat score</p>

<p>PM sent :)</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

<p>Thats some of the best advice I've ever read on CC.</p>

<p>raspberry..would you mind reading my essay as well?</p>

<p>Sure thing. P to the M it over...</p>

<p>I don't have a clear passion and I got in. Don't worry too much guys if you're well-rounded.</p>

<p>Raspberry~ Done. Thanks again!</p>

<p>Ahh! Brown is catching Dartmouth up in # of posts! We need to revive the OR Game again!</p>