<p>Need trustworthy people to take a look at my essay.</p>
<p>Any constructive critcism would help :)</p>
<p>thanks so much!</p>
<p>Just post below and ill pm it!</p>
<p>Bumping this up!</p>
<p>Someone please respond :(</p>
<p>I can read it! I won’t steal it (already applied to Penn ED, finished all other apps). PM me if you so choose.</p>
<p>I can read it, I’m a mom whose read a bunch of ED essays and most everyone was extremely grateful for the comments, whether they accepted them or not.</p>
<p>i’ll read 
after reading, i’ll give my general opinion of what i think of you from the essay</p>
<p>I’ll critique it. I’ve already written my own essay and sent them out (Nov 1) as you can see from my previous posts.</p>