Finished First Draft of CommonApp Essay. Needs critiquing.

College Essays
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<p>I just finished my first draft and would love criticism and suggestions. Post here and I will PM it to you.</p>

2

<p>send it my way!</p>

3

<p>Sure, PM it over!</p>

4

<p>Pm it here!</p>

5

<p>I’ll take a look :).</p>