Finished my 1st draft of my college essay, would like some critique

College Essays
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<p>Just finished my 1st draft. Its a bit long, tops out at a little over 800 words.
My essay is, in my opinion, pretty raw and I would appreciate it if anyone could read it and give their opinions on my topic, and the paper in general.
Be as honest and ruthless in your opinions as you want. </p>

<p>Just ask and I will PM it to you</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>ill read it as well</p>

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<p>I’ll read.</p>

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<p>Pm it over!!!</p>

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<p>PM me and I’ll give it a read!
:D</p>

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<p>pm me it. 10char</p>

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<p>I’d love to see it. PM ME.</p>

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<p>i’d be HAPPY to help you ! =]
PM me :)</p>

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<p>i’ll read it!</p>

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<p>I will read it! :)</p>

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<p>pm it .i will read it!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it…</p>

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<p>I’ll go for it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, PM me.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you like.</p>

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<p>Sure, send it over.</p>

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<p>I’d me more than happy to give some constructive feedback.</p>

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<p>Please send it my way.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>