<p>Keep in mind I still have to edit, and show it to my English teacher. I hope it is good enough. It goes over the limit slightly though. It is 600 something words. I hope that won't be a problem. I will be out till like like 7pm or so. If anyone wants to read it pm me and I will send it over when I get back. Thanks!</p>
<p>go ahead and send! Good luck with the appl. process, its been killer!</p>
<p>Will review. good luck</p>
<p>Finished my revised copy. This one is much better. Let me know if anyone is interested in reading. Thanks!</p>