<p>Hey guys... this is my first essay for any non-school related thing
can somebody please read it and give me advice as to how to improve it?</p>
<p>thanks in advance</p>
<p>I'd be glad to help out. PM it to me.</p>
<p>Hey guys... this is my first essay for any non-school related thing
can somebody please read it and give me advice as to how to improve it?</p>
<p>thanks in advance</p>
<p>I'd be glad to help out. PM it to me.</p>