First college essay I've ever written

College Essays
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<p>So, it may or may not be really bad. I just wrote it a little while ago, and didn't do too much revision yet, so it may have a lot of room for improvement. Anyone want to give suggestions/advice?</p>

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<p>PM me!!!</p>

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<p>pm me 10char</p>

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<p>pm me too
:)</p>

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<p>I’ll give it a go.</p>

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<p>PM me if you like</p>

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<p>I’ll have a read please</p>

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<p>you can pm me as well</p>

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<p>pm me if you want.</p>

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<p>Sorry for those that wanted to read that I did not send it to. I received quite a bit of good advice and I’m going to take some time to look over everything about the essay, including the topic I chose itself. I will have later versions of the essay for people to read, but for now, I’m going to close the requests. Thank you all for volunteering. ^^</p>