First commonapp rough draft

<p>would anyone be willing to read over and edit/critique my first draft of my commonapp essay? I'm answering my own question and I'm not so sure the quality of my writing abilities. thanks in advance</p>

<p>Sure - I’ll read it!</p>

<p>pm
teeeencharizard</p>

<p>will read as well. pm me</p>

<p>I’ll read it, just pm it over.</p>

<p>Willing to read it, PM if you want comments/editing.</p>

<p>I’ll read it. PM the essay to me and i can give you suggestions quickly.</p>

<p>ill read it send it ovwr</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>