first draft done need some feed back

College Essays
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<p>I just finished writing my first college essay and I'm looking for some opinions.I'll pm it to you you're interested. thanks.</p>

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<p>ill be happy to read it.</p>

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<p>anyone else who wants to read it?</p>

4

<p>anyone else who wants to read it? …</p>

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<p>I wouldn’t mind.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll take a look</p>