First draft of Common App Essay, Feedback Appreciated

College Essays
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<p>Hi all,</p>

<p>I'm looking for some feedback on my Common App essay, there is no prompt. Send me a PM or reply to this thread if you would like to help.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>I’ll reads it!</p>

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<p>ill read it for you</p>

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<p>I’ll be happy to take a look ^^</p>

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<p>I would love to give you feedbacks!</p>

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<p>I can give feedback!</p>