<p>This is my first common app, anything topic essay. I was hoping to get some feedback on subject choice, as well as writing style etc. If anybody could help id appreciate it!
Just post and I'll PM it to you! Thank you so much!</p>
<p>I will read it</p>
<p>thanks joseph!</p>
<p>I’ll be glad to look it over. Just PM me :)</p>
<p>If I can I will be glad to help you as well</p>
<p>Thank you everybody! As always, more criticism is welcome!</p>
<p>I will take a look if you’d like.</p>
<p>Thank you all!</p>