First Essay- Rough Draft

<p>Is anyone willing to read my essay. It is by no means complete, I'm just looking to see if I am on the right track? Thanks a lot just let me know and I'll PM it to you!</p>

<p>sure just pm me</p>

<p>Yea pm me the essay and ill look it over for you.</p>

<p>i will. pm me</p>

<p>you can PM me</p>

<p>me too! :)</p>

<p>i'm in, pm it over.</p>