<p>I would agree with a 6 as well, but not far at all from an 8. There was a lot of potential in using The Fountainhead, and the Basketball anecdote was really good. However, there wasn’t any backup information for Peter Keating, besides generic comments. Using a novel or historical reference should be done with specific information in mind. I thought the sentence structure was pretty solid, and there were some strong vocab words in there, so keep those up!</p>