<p>Hey would any Upenn or Ivy league students/graduates please read my First experience essay via. PM please. I’m not the greatest writer but I’m trying.- </p>
<p>thanx, please give feed back</p>
<p>i'm not an Ivy League student (haha, obviously, or else i wouldn't be so freaked over gettin IN!) but i'd love to read your essay if you want. i'm curious as to what other people might have written/are writing about. i applied ED, so all i can do is read other people's essays and beat myself up about how i missed this and that lol. email me or PM me if you want my input ^_^</p>
<p>---bump---</p>
<p>chibiajiajin, did you get my essay?</p>
<p>i did get your essay. from my first read i can say that it was pretty good and definitely very interesting. can i give you the full critique tomorrow?</p>
<p>cool, but before you do that, I revised it...sorry...lol</p>
<p>i'll read it too, but i'm a lowly hopeless applicant</p>
<p>haha, ok. do you want me to revise the one you sent me, or PM me the new one??</p>
<p>26e - i'm hopeless, too, so i'm helping my competition lol</p>
<p>I'd be happy to read it too if you want another opinion. PM me.</p>
<p>what... sorry this has nothing to do with this thread, but what does "bump" mean?</p>
<p>Its when something is on another page usually and you want it to appear at the top of the discussion list to get more views, thus more replies</p>
<p>B ring U p M y P ost - i learnt tt fr another thread</p>
<p>wow..i didn't know it was an actual acronym... lol. i just imagined it as if you were physically bumping up something lol.</p>
<p>Learn somethin' new every day.</p>
<p>I like this particular crop of threads today- I guess after we ED applicants got our apps in, everyone's a lot more relaxed :)</p>
<p>Who would have thought? "Bring Up My Post-" </p>
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