first impressions on essay!

Applying to College
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<p>would any one like to read my personal narrative? Its finalized, I would just like to hear peoples first reactions, people who do not know me. I personally love it, and i am hopeing it will grasp the attention of the addcoms. Thanks guys! just let me know if u want to read it and I will pm it to u quickly! thanks!</p>

<p>maddy!</p>

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<p>sure, PM me and i'll critique it for you</p>

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<p>I'll read it over if you want!</p>

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<p>yeah pm me, i'll read it!</p>

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<p>Please PM me.
I will share my opinions.</p>

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<p>PM me. kaaaaaay?</p>

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<p>I'll read it too! :)</p>

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<p>I'll read it.</p>

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<p>I'll take a look</p>

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<p>i will read. PM me!</p>

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<p>i will help</p>

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<p>pm me, ill read</p>

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<p>I will help.</p>

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<p>Ha we are all bored I guess. But I am really willing to give you some decent feedback.</p>

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<p>ill read too!</p>

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<p>I'll edit your essay.</p>

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<p>PM me please.</p>

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<p>PM me please!</p>

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<p>i'll give some feedback</p>