<p>I am using the "How to earn a 12 in ten days" method.
But, I'm running into some trouble in the body paragraphs.</p>
<p>I keep rambling on in my examples. Thus, I run out of time.
I know what I'm doing wrong. But, I don't know how to fix them.
I set up "questions" to address like: What happened? What does it mean? What did it result in? But, I put too much detail in the book's summary and take too long to get to the meaning part.</p>
<p>Is there a way I can fix my writing?</p>
<p>In the play Othello by WS, Othello's misplaced faith and trust in his "loyal" comrade Iago results in killing his innocent wife. In the play, Othello is deceived by Iago, who misleads him to believe that his wife is having an affair with his lieutenant, Cassio.....(description).
(point). (conlcuding sentence).</p>
<p>So, my problem is that it takes me LOTS of description and explaination to reach my point. Can anyone give me tips on how to improve this?
This question might seem redundant seeing how I know what my problem is, but I really need help!! Thanks in advance :D I really really appreciate it!</p>