first timer- CommonApp essay - any takers?

College Essays
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<p>would anyone like to read my essay?</p>

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<p>bummpp. ed deadline is soon.
any help will be appreciated!</p>

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<p>I will read.</p>

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<p>I'll take a look</p>

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<p>I will be glad to read it.
I am in college already, won't copy your ideas</p>

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<p>Happy to read and give comment:)</p>

<p>PM me</p>

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<p>send it, and I'll brutally critique it!</p>

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<p>Hi epith3t, </p>

<p>I am willing to critique your essay ... if you return the favor for me for my essays. Trading essays is the best. </p>

<p>However, I prefer communicating by e-mail so that my inbox isn't always so stuffed and so that I can attach my essay critique on a Word documents (I put comments as ToolTips directly over problem areas so that you know where to correct things). Just PM me and we can trade e-mail addresses.</p>

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<p>i'll take a look at your essays if you like, just pm it over!</p>

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<p>I'd be glad to take a look and offer some feedback. PM me!</p>

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<p>My opinion on your essay:</p>

<p>I think that instead of telling how Duke will benefit you, you are telling the reader about Duke.
I see where you are going though, but it needs some revising, in my opinion.</p>

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<p>PM it to me.
or email me at: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a><a href="hint:%20i'm%20at%20my%20email%20more%20often">/email</a></p>

<p>not an 09-er.
be forewarned, i'm very frank.</p>