For anyone helping their kids with the Common App Personal Statement

I’ve written a thing, but it’s posted in a hard-to-find area of the site and I’m afraid it won’t help people because they’re not likely to see it (I’ve been using this site for a long time and didn’t even know the “College Essays” area existed–it’s not in the sidebar!).

I’d love feedback, comments, or questions from anyone here about it:

Marvin 100’s Personal Statement Advice
http://talk.qa.collegeconfidential.com/college-admissions/2101547-marvin-100s-personal-statement-advice.html

Closing thread. Please leave any comments for Marvin on the link above.