<p>NOTE: I am not trying to be snobby or pretentious in any way...I am just trying to describe my application/profile and views on what got me in to these colleges...</p>
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<p>Stats:[ul]
[<em>]SAT: 2090
[</em>]SAT II: Math2:720, USHistory:650, Physics:710
[<em>]ACT: N/A
[</em>]GPA: 3.54 uw
[<em>]Rank: N/A
[</em>]Other Tests: AP Psychology:4, AP Physics:2 (i was sick...), AP USHistory:4
[/ul]Subjective[ul]
[<em>]Essays: Superb (imo...). I don't want to sound pretentious, but I guess I'm a pretty good writer...
[</em>]Teacher Recs: Two Teachers who I know personally and are amazing (both have Ph.D's): English, AP USHistory/AP EuropeanHistory
[<em>]Counselor Rec: Senior Class Dean
[</em>]Supplementary Material: Short Story I wrote and was published in a literary magazine
[<em>]Hook: Won a bunch of awards for violin and writing.. [/ul]Personal[ul]
[</em>]Location: Honolulu, Hawaii
[<em>]High School Type: Private
[</em>]Ethnicity: Asian
[<em>]Gender: M
[</em>]Applied for Financial Aid: Yes[/ul]Other[ul]
[<em>]Extracurriculars: Violin (Youth Symphony Orchestra, National Honor Orchestra, Interlochen Summer Camp, HMTA Finalist, MNTA Finalist (west region), etc), I teach Violin to underpriviledged children (for 4years+) Sports: V-Golf (3years), V-Volleyball (2years, all-state), JV-Basketball (1year), Speech & Debate (state qualifier), Mock Trial, Key Club, JSA creator (of my district), avid writer of fiction/literature
[</em>]Awards: VIOLIN: Honolulu Symphony Concerto Competition Laureate, HMTA strings competition Laureate, MNTA mid-region finalist, Interlochen Youth Concerto Competition 2nd place, Selected short stories published in Literary Magazine & Local newspapers, other miscellaneous stuff
[li]Advice? Commiserations? Feel like bragging?: It's not all about GPA...In my case, relatively, I had pretty low SAT scores and a low GPA, but I was "passionate" and excelled at a couple of things (also, it helped that my highschool was/is a very recognized institution for most universities and colleges...It's Barack Obama's alma mater as well as Steve Case (AOL founder), the eBay founder, Michelle Wie, Kelly Preston (actress), etc...LOOK IT UP ON WIKIPEDIA).<br>[/li]I also believe that most colleges want someone who is dedicated and passionate about a couple of subjects and activities and truly excels at them rather than joining 50+ extracurriculars and being mediocre/dispassionate
I think what got me in was my essay describing my first community service project as a high school freshmen...I taught violin technique (how to play a violin) to a group of ten underprivileged children for $1 an hour...and I taught each one of them for four straight years. I described a couple of real examples during those four years that exemplified perseverance and tenacity on both my students and i's account.
It also helps if you win a couple of national titles and competitions...
Anyway, I think the essays have the "final say" in terms of a decision of acceptance or denied admission...the essay is the only way for these admission officers to truly connect with the applicants on a personal level...so take your time on them, and make sure you write to the best of your abilities.[/ul]</p>
<p>So far, I have gotten into:</p>
<p>Santa Clara University
American University
University of Chicago
USC
Boston University
Johns Hopkins University
University of Rochester</p>
<p>Waiting on:</p>
<p>UPENN
Columbia
Tufts</p>
<p>***EDIT: Oh, I also forgot to mention my "political activism" as well as my position with the Obama '08 campaign. I'm a student organizer for the Obama campaign (they have flown me out to Iowa, California, and New Mexico) to campaign along side the senator and his sister. It's very interesting and I got to witness firsthand the dog-eat-dog world of politics. I think this scored a lot of points with most of my colleges. I am very aware of my surrounding world (in terms of politics, foreign policy and issues, etc), so I also described my experiences fighting as a lobbyist in my state senate as well as working alongside with the ACLU on certain lawsuits that I feel passionate about</p>