Frantic need for severe essay edit

College Essays
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<p>please please please pleaase edit my common app essay. i scrapped my old one last night. and wrote a new one.</p>

<p>and it desires soooo much criticism </p>

<p>please? <3</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look at it, if you PM it to me.
I’m still fine-tuning my own apps, so I can’t promise a massive editing overhaul, but I’ll offer some tips. :)</p>

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<p>I will take a look at it-PM me</p>

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<p>Thanks, I sent you both msgs for your email because it wont fit in a PM but you guys haven’t responded ):</p>

<p>Anyone else? Pleaseee?</p>