<p>I just wanted someone's opinion on my first essay for the first prompt. It reads, "Beyond rankings, location, and athletics, why are you interested in attending Georgia Tech?" This is what I wrote:</p>
<p>"Throughout my high school career, I have signed up for multiple advanced or AP courses that would challenge my intellect and determination. Although the course load became difficult at times, I have truly enjoyed learning the complex concepts that were being given to me. I believe that admission to GA Tech will gratify my desire to complete a challenging undergraduate degree program for biomedical engineering. The institution is one of the best engineering schools that an aspiring engineer such as I can attend. I know that if I were to be accepted, I would wholeheartedly place my goals in mind before I make any tough decisions, and I genuinely believe that a post-secondary education at GA Tech will be one of the best decisions that I have ever made."</p>
<p>What do you think?</p>